Wednesday, February 26, 2014

The fashion show has been trying to go on forever in a day and finally it has came to and end and now, its canceled! they have worked really hard and dedicated their time to going to practices and trying to being a student with outside activities. After going to some of the practices and seeing them work so hard and being into what they were doing, no matter what the show should still go on. Every time the show was suppose to go the weather was bad and or timing was bad and it was just something that had to come in the way. All the girls had their outfits and was getting pretty and come to find out there is nothing. I feel for the girls because they truly worked hard and then get nothing out of it .
In class we have been trying to make our way through our first paper and doing peer reviews and doing a process memo. In the memo we talked about why we basically picked our first paper and how did the peer reviews helped or didn't help us, and what would it do differently or what were going to do going forward. This semester has been the worst cause Ive been really lazy and procrastinating of doing my work. Our essay are lengthy and more descriptive. My first essay is on Capital Punishment For Violent Crimes, I love criminal things and I love trying to detect problems,

Monday, February 17, 2014

Feb 12, 2014
 
 
In class on Wednesday feb 14, 2014 we did peer reviews with our groups. we had to read our papers to our group, and then they had to read it and make corrections. I was the only one in my group who had my paper so there wasn't to many corrections that could be done to everybody's paper. Our papers have to be 1500 words and I got about to 500  words. we have kinda missed a lot of class period times so we haven't really been in class to do anything. The snow has really pushed back our days and our class times.

Thursday, February 6, 2014

Feb 6th
 
 
On Feb 5th in class we talked about our argumentative paper that our first rough draft is due Monday Feb the 10th and our first paper is on Crime and Punishment, we discussed how we should have out paper more to speaking to the audience. We watched a video and went through a PowerPoint to give us tips about how to set the paper. Our paper has to be 1500 words and its a research paper. It amazes me how I can jump from English 100 only writing 750 words and now English 101 and now writing 1500 which is almost 4 1/2 pages.  I have a lot to argue you about crime and punishment such as the death penalty and how it doesn't get used properly. we have human beings out here killing and kidnapping and there's nothing getting done to there consequences but jail time. There are many more situations. Also we brainstormed a little and came up with some actually topics to write about such as: Law, Crime, Punishment, Crime Rates, and many more. This is our first paper and I hope I do good and continue to boost my writing.